Tuesday, December 22, 2009

Eulogy of Always

Always and Plum was slaves that was horrible being mistreated at some risk. They both was hard-working woman for their slave owner. Always might say at the burial would be is that she was rape by Doak. Always had emotion to her side. Always looked at the land she was on through pain and hooded eyes and hate.
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5 comments:

  1. Nick M.December 23, 2009 at 12:56 AM

    You can do better than this, Jo. You need more information on how Always felt about Plum and Doak. What else would Always say about Doak raping her? Also, try adding more info. on Always speaking at her sisters burial.

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  2. Leo_#8December 24, 2009 at 2:04 PM

    I agree with Nick dude. You need more info on what Always would say at the burial of her sis Plum. Other than that it looks like you understand what the story is talking about. Keep it up and put a bit more effort into the assignments haha.

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  3. lara joseDecember 25, 2009 at 5:34 PM

    Joseph my dude, you need more attention to the readers. Also to work a little bit more on that vocabulary and how you trying to put it. Don't worry dude it's all good. You can get better on the next one, if you need help ask me or the rest of the dudes man common let's show Ms.Fletcher we can do this man!!!! hahahahaha

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  4. IsraelDecember 25, 2009 at 9:43 PM

    Joseph, not bad. Though, there is always room for improvement, you could have gave more information about Always and Plum and how they live their lives as slaves. Good Job, though.

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  5. Ms. FletchDecember 25, 2009 at 10:00 PM

    Rewrite. I did not want a summary. I asked for a Eulogy. Thanks Nick ( I expect that type of scholarly behavior).

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